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When The Mountain Weeps

They leave at dusk, when hills turn blue,
past terraced fields their fathers knew.
With calloused palms and woven bags,
they board the buses, clutch their tags.
The festival lights fade from sight—
a sister’s laugh, a mother’s fright.
For Gulf-bound wind or Malaysian rain,
they trade their mountains for a chain
of borrowed money, stamped permits,
and concrete tombs where hope can split.

In Doha’s heat or Dubai’s glass,
twelve hours bend a man to grass
that isn’t grass—it’s stucco, steel,
a plaster wound that will not heal.
They sleep in rooms of sweating tin,
tongues thick with salt, chins sharp and thin.
No puja bells, no monsoon smell,
just the foreman's curse, the worker's shell.
A son is born via crackling phone—
he cries alone, he cries alone.

But someday, maybe, they will climb
the path they left for stolen time.
Bring bricks of gold to broken doors,
sweep festival dust from earthen floors.
The soil will know their feet again—
their ache, their love, their stubborn strain.
Oh Nepali hands that build the world,
your flag is torn, your back is curled,
yet from your pain, a harvest grows—
a seed no desert ever knows.
Posted by Rangeela 1 month ago chat_bubble_outline 7 replies visibility 26 views

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S Smriti 1 month ago
nice... love the mountain vibes
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D Dipen 1 month ago
Now somebody needs to translate this and make it into a nice song like 40 katechi ramaulo vibe
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P PPP 1 month ago
Maybe ask Durgesh Thapa to make it happen
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N NepaliMan 1 month ago
Sisan Baniya as well
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G guffamaster 29 days ago
AI can make the video hehe
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R Rangeela 21 days ago
why dont you guys get together and make the video yourselves
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K Kukhurachor 14 days ago
I can make a music video if you want

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